Writing an argument:
Statement: “Children should eat lollies”
Do you agree or disagree?
Use the table to help you with your decision:
Children should eat lollies because...
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Children should not eat lollies because...
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1
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They love lollies
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Lollies rot their teeth
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2
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They taste sweet
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They could get sick
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3
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They can be happy
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They could end up with diabetes
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4
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Lollies are cheap to buy
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They could get too fat
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5
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They are colourful
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It has too much sugar and makes kids hyper
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Children should not eat lollies because it can rot their teeth. If kids eat to much lollies their teeth could turn black and fall out. If their teeth get routine they will have to see a dentist and the dentist will clean it for them. It is important that you brush your teeth every day so they are clean.
If they eat too much lollies they could also get really sick and you will have to go and see a doctor. The doctor will give you some medication to help you feel better. You could end up with a cold or feel dizzy and you will have to have to lie down.
You could end up with diabetes which means you have probably had too much sugar. Diabetes is a disease/illness and you could die by diabetes. Lollies have lots of sugar, that is how you get fat or have diabetes.
If kids eat to much lollies they could go all hyper because they had too much sugar. If they go hyper they could be really bad and break something. The they might break might be really expensive or old.
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