Friday, May 31, 2013

Argument about kids eating lollies

Writing an argument:
Statement: “Children should eat lollies”
Do you agree or disagree?
Use the table to help you with your decision:

Children should eat lollies because...
Children should not eat lollies because...
They love lollies

Lollies rot their teeth
They taste sweet

They could get sick
They can be happy

They could end up with diabetes
Lollies are cheap to buy

They could get too fat
They are colourful

It has too much sugar and makes kids hyper
Children should not eat lollies because it can rot their teeth. If kids eat to much lollies their teeth could turn black and fall out. If their teeth get routine they will have to see a dentist and the dentist will clean it for them. It is important that you brush your teeth every day so they are clean.

If they eat too much lollies they could also get really sick and you will have to go and see a doctor. The doctor will give you some medication to help you feel better. You could end up with a cold or feel dizzy and you will have to have to lie down.

You could end up with diabetes which means you have probably had too much sugar. Diabetes is a disease/illness and you could die by diabetes. Lollies have lots of sugar, that is how you get fat or have diabetes.

If kids eat to much lollies they could go all hyper because they had too much sugar. If they go hyper they could be really bad and break something. The they might break might be really expensive or old.

Friday, May 10, 2013

ingredients for a healthy sandwich

sandwich one, Brown Bread, Chicken, Tomatoes, Mayonnaise

sandwich two, Buns, ham, lettuce, Mayo

sandwich three, Buns, Patty, Lettuce, Cucumber, Tomatoes, Tomato sauce, Mayonnaise,

Paris Holiday

In the holidays I went to the movies and I watched iron man three with my cousins and we had three big drinks and popcorn it was awesome. At iron man three the best part of the movie was the end of the movie because there was a big fight and then all these robot iron men came and started to help the original iron man. All of them together were like a giant army of flying robots.

My favourite thing about the holidays was going to the beach. The beach I went to was Mission Bay I played in the water with my little brother and cousin they had lots of fun in the water. Then I went to McDonald and had a big mac and a pepsi it was very nice. Then we went back to the beach played in the sand then mum told us were going home now and I run to the car and was first in the front. at pt england is a famous singer and he is also in a group called the black eyed peas.I was astonished that he came to pt england school and I performed right in front of it was awesome and I had allot fun on stage I would even do it again if I was allowed.

Before us was the polonium group and they done awesome I was really happy that we were chosen to preform when we finished and the audience was clapping and cheering when we were coming off stage. Then stood up and gave a $100.000.00 check from his foundation I am angel and it was a big check.

When I was coming back to class was there and he was talking to our class and It was cool because he came to our school and hallinstine brothers also came and they brought him here. The reason he came is because he saw our work online and he thought that we did good online.